The story of Vallin Jace.
Åh, när jag nämnde Star Wars fanfic'en i förra inlägget var jag bara tvungen att läsa igenom den. Jag skrev den när jag var 14, baserat på rollspelande med Ridde, Markus och Björn på http://avidgamers.com/StWa. Den är faktiskt ganska bra nu när jag tänker efter. Jag publicerade den aldrig någonstans, men jag kanske borde göra det. Dom har en Star Wars-avdelning på fanfic.net, kanske ska ge den en chans.
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Chapter 7; Contact with the past.
The falleen stretched out its hand to help Vallin get up from the floor, but noticed that she was stuck under the mandalorians dead body.
"You looked like you needed a handle," he said easily and a pleasant smile dressed his lips. Vallin who couldn't exactly move from where she lay moaned with pain when he kicked the dead mandalorian away from her body.
"Thanks but I'm fine" Vallin groaned with pain again and tried to get up. She failed misarably and fell down hard on her back again. The falleen smiled sarcastic and crouched down beside her.
"You are not fine, beautiful" he replied, his eyes focused on her clothes. It felt like he was undressing her in his mind.
The Falleen was moving his hands over her pained area. Slowly, in circles. Vallin felt her broken bones heal, her organ returning to normal functionality and her brain started to think fast and logical again.
"You are a force-user?" Vallin quickly rose up from her position on the floor. The force had healed her; there was no other explanation to the sudden disappearance off pain. The Falleen seemed somewhat surprised; he also rose and placed himself close in front of her.
"Didn't you notice my lightsable?" he asked her sarcastic.
"There are many kinds of people using that weapon nowadays" Vallin replied and looked the falleen suspicious in the eyes. He answered by glancing humorusly back at her, fingering on his weapon as to prove his importance.
"You're a sith, right?" she asked. He nodded and kept looking her in the eyes. His skin suddenly changed color from the light green color to a darker green; he kept acting normal as if nothing had happened. Vallin decided to not say anything either, but she infact was quite bothered by his change of color on the skin. He rubbed her back softly a little while before his hands moved down over her vertebras and stopped right over her backside.
"So why did you save me?" Vallin whispered and looked at him curiosly. The Falleen didn't answer, just fired off a bright smile and leaned in close to her ear, whispering:
"A smile is the best way of answering someone when in fact you have no other answers"
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Chapter 7; Contact with the past.
The falleen stretched out its hand to help Vallin get up from the floor, but noticed that she was stuck under the mandalorians dead body.
"You looked like you needed a handle," he said easily and a pleasant smile dressed his lips. Vallin who couldn't exactly move from where she lay moaned with pain when he kicked the dead mandalorian away from her body.
"Thanks but I'm fine" Vallin groaned with pain again and tried to get up. She failed misarably and fell down hard on her back again. The falleen smiled sarcastic and crouched down beside her.
"You are not fine, beautiful" he replied, his eyes focused on her clothes. It felt like he was undressing her in his mind.
The Falleen was moving his hands over her pained area. Slowly, in circles. Vallin felt her broken bones heal, her organ returning to normal functionality and her brain started to think fast and logical again.
"You are a force-user?" Vallin quickly rose up from her position on the floor. The force had healed her; there was no other explanation to the sudden disappearance off pain. The Falleen seemed somewhat surprised; he also rose and placed himself close in front of her.
"Didn't you notice my lightsable?" he asked her sarcastic.
"There are many kinds of people using that weapon nowadays" Vallin replied and looked the falleen suspicious in the eyes. He answered by glancing humorusly back at her, fingering on his weapon as to prove his importance.
"You're a sith, right?" she asked. He nodded and kept looking her in the eyes. His skin suddenly changed color from the light green color to a darker green; he kept acting normal as if nothing had happened. Vallin decided to not say anything either, but she infact was quite bothered by his change of color on the skin. He rubbed her back softly a little while before his hands moved down over her vertebras and stopped right over her backside.
"So why did you save me?" Vallin whispered and looked at him curiosly. The Falleen didn't answer, just fired off a bright smile and leaned in close to her ear, whispering:
"A smile is the best way of answering someone when in fact you have no other answers"
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